Writing Standards
IDEAS : My writing provides new information from personal experiences, followed by effective evidence and details. The two content I chose from first semester is "The World I Come From" and "Two Sides of Paradise"
THE WORLD I COME FROM
- I chose this piece to represent my usage of ideas, because I incorporated information from personal experiences. This was more of a personal essay explaining about what my life is like and it was really easy to add details and evidence about these experiences.
TWO SIDES OF PARADISE
- I also chose this essay to represent how I use ideas. My essay was about what true Hawaiʻi culture is and I really did have to add in some personal experiences and I also used those experiences as my evidence.
- I chose this piece to represent my usage of ideas, because I incorporated information from personal experiences. This was more of a personal essay explaining about what my life is like and it was really easy to add details and evidence about these experiences.
TWO SIDES OF PARADISE
- I also chose this essay to represent how I use ideas. My essay was about what true Hawaiʻi culture is and I really did have to add in some personal experiences and I also used those experiences as my evidence.
ORGANIZATION : My writing is able to flow from beginning to end, introducing the topic, providing reasoning and evidence, with a conclusion that summarizes all points.
OCEANS OF NOTHING :
- One of the assignments that I want to associate my use of organization with would be this essay, I think this essay would fit into using organization, because I used a regular ABC format instead of free writing everything. I answered the question in the first paragraph, provided reasons and evidence in the second and then concluded all of it in the end.
THE WORLD I COME FROM :
- The next assignment I used was this essay. I thought that this related to organization because I put what my life is like in the first half and what my life isnʻt really like in the second. If I didnʻt use organization, I probably would have mixed these up.
- One of the assignments that I want to associate my use of organization with would be this essay, I think this essay would fit into using organization, because I used a regular ABC format instead of free writing everything. I answered the question in the first paragraph, provided reasons and evidence in the second and then concluded all of it in the end.
THE WORLD I COME FROM :
- The next assignment I used was this essay. I thought that this related to organization because I put what my life is like in the first half and what my life isnʻt really like in the second. If I didnʻt use organization, I probably would have mixed these up.
VOICE : My writing shows I have put enough details about the topic so the reader can almost hear my voice while reading.
WORDS FROM THE HEART :
- I chose this to represent using voice. I feel like because this was a story I was telling, I used a lot of details. It was enough to wear you could kind of visualize everything that I was saying at most points.
MY QUERENCIA :
- I feel like this would also represent the usage of voice very well, because I had a back story as to why that certain location is my Querencia.
- I chose this to represent using voice. I feel like because this was a story I was telling, I used a lot of details. It was enough to wear you could kind of visualize everything that I was saying at most points.
MY QUERENCIA :
- I feel like this would also represent the usage of voice very well, because I had a back story as to why that certain location is my Querencia.
WORD CHOICE : My choice of words are suitable for the topic. THe words are able to fully explain what Iʻm trying to say.
CNN NEWS REACTION :
- I chose this to represent my usage of good word choice. I think that this showed me being able to use words that fit the content because it sounds like it flows pretty well and every word in the essay makes sense.
TWO SIDES OF PARADISE :
- This next piece I chose to represent good word choice was in this essay, I tried to use words that related best to my topic and I also used mostly positive words because my essay was -- for the most part -- a more positive writing piece.
- I chose this to represent my usage of good word choice. I think that this showed me being able to use words that fit the content because it sounds like it flows pretty well and every word in the essay makes sense.
TWO SIDES OF PARADISE :
- This next piece I chose to represent good word choice was in this essay, I tried to use words that related best to my topic and I also used mostly positive words because my essay was -- for the most part -- a more positive writing piece.