1. I enjoyed reading each of Zion's pieces. Each had its own voice and perspective and unique in its own way. I love the Querencia pieces because the pictures in conjunction with a short writing part was so visual and impactful. Such a fun way to snapshot a look into who she is.
2. I enjoyed the portfolio as a whole. There was a variety of writing pieces that not only showed me what she's learning, but her perspective of herself, the world around her and how she fits into it. After reading her reflection and future goals, I would agree that Zion can continue to work towards managing her time between so many different classes, co-curricular activities and home.
3. I think Zion had a pretty strong voice in her writing.
4. I also think Zion's organization is okay. I believe if she puts a little more time into her writing to organize her thoughts and flow, then she can develop this skill as well